mortal kombat.EXE creepypasta review

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This is without a doubt, one of the worst pasta stories I have ever read.

I think it's worse than "tails doll curse" and "red dwarf IX". I really hate this pasta. Why is it one of the worst?

Well, a little back story should give you a good reason. First when I first read this story I was both a mortal kombat fan and a eager to read creepypasta with file extensions in the title. So I read this one hoping it would be as good as sonic.exe, it wasn't. It was just plain stupid.

reading it again I've noticed a bunch of problems, first off how did the game know the guys name? I hate that cliche, but where did it say he used his name for anything on his computer? And how did that person get killed? who killed him? and what's with all those pictures of dead people? were there many people playing this game or were they just people with the same name as the guy's friend? and how was there sounds coming out of muted speakers? is it a virus? alright so let's take things one step at a time.

First I want to say this. This pasta is a tad cliched. Let's count them.
Computer crashing
Killing somebody in game kills somebody for real life
impossible shit happening
images of horrible things that can't be gotten rid of
finding the game while just being bored on the internet
not having proof of the games existence
curiosity to excitement to horror

Yeah overusing cliches doesn't mean your pasta will be better it just makes it more predictable and may even add a few plot holes.

This was probably the review I examined the pasta the least in, but can I be blamed this pasta is atrocious and not even worth half a read through, alright I need to calm down.

Rating: 2/10 the fact that it exists astonishes me.
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