My Sister was Murdered... Creepypasta Review

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See this, this is why I hate abnormally long titles.

Also, Dear Reddit, I don't like you, nor your /r/nosleep page, so don't expect me to do a whole lot more Reddit exclusives.

So yeah, already two strikes against this pasta, but to be fair, it isn't really bad, actually it's kind of interesting.

This pasta is about conjoined twins, and how they were very close, but their parents wanted a normal daughter. Immediately, I dislike the parents, maybe it is my autism speaking, but when parents claim they wanted a "normal" child, I can't help but think that this parent should not have been a parent, then again I dislike the idea of "normal" anyway so bleh.

I do admit, this creepypasta did have a few interesting parts, the part where the sister dies was actullay fascinating to read, and the twist at the end actually gave me a thought, why do people have a desire to be normal? After all, what is normal for the Spider, is chaos for the fly, and what is normal for the bear, is chaos to the poor sod who tried to get near them. Normal is anything but, it is all based in perspective, it is normal for me to get angry at small issues, but walking in a straight line? I can't do that, even though I'm sober. The idea of a normal life style is quite unfortunately more used in the consumer world we live in, "It's normal to do this, and not normal to do that" and...

Woah, I'm really getting off topic, reminder to talk more about normality in the future.

Anyway, where was I? Oh right, the creepypasta, umm... I do think this was an interesting read, although much like with Gateway to the Mind I do have to question something, as I am not a conjoined twin I'm not really sure but, do conjoined twins share thoughts? It's not uncommon for people to share thoughts and read minds, mostly, so can conjoined twins share thoughts?

Oh well, if there is one thing I'm not fond of, it is the ending, it's not "this was the last thing written before she died" like the last story I reviewed, but it still took me out of the mood. Although it was a better ending, and considering the twist I don't think any other ending would have worked, I don't know, go read it and see what you think. Yeah, what kind of a critic am I? Telling people to get their own opinions, ha.

Honestly, this was alright. I think my standards have been set a touch to high, but I enjoyed this for what it was. Not really one in my top ten, but maybe top fifty. I probably could have articulated more if I didn't go on a huge rant about "Normality", but that's why people like Ayumu.

I give this a 7/10, should I make a tasteless joke? Nah...

And hey, if you enjoyed this review, check out my previous reviews on my page, I don't do a whole lot on my journal anyway. Link here: fanis01.deviantart.com/
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