Cupcakes creepypasta review

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Dear princess Celestia

I know I technically already reviewed this pasta when I was still reviewing fan-made my little pony episodes, however, I only gave it a rating and as people know, sometimes opinions change.

So now I'm reviewing cupcakes, but first a little background. Cupcakes is a my little pony fanfiction written by "Sgt. Sprinkles", making this the second fanfiction I've ever reviewed, (the first was betrayal by blood), also making this the second my little pony creepypasta to review (The first being luna game), wow, not only is this a reminder of my very first review, it's also a reminder of where I truly got started.

Cupcakes has the sadistic story of Pinkie Pie murdering Rainbow dash. Pinkie is doing this to make cupcakes, probably for the cakes' twin toddlers, a part of me wonders if the cupcakes will taste like skittles. Another part of me wonders that if that's true and each pony has a distinct flavour, what would the other characters taste like?

There's this whole backstory of how she's been doing this for a while and how nopony has noticed and I'm pretty sure Twilight would notice that one of her six best friends is missing. I really wonder if hasbro has actually read this story. It'd be a funny thought.

The pasta is well written and has more of a shock factor, you just wouldn't imagine Pinkie Pie doing this, okay yes, you could imagine her being slightly crazy but not tearing other ponies up.
There are some problems with it though, first there's this thing where a pony's number comes up and they become cupcakes, it makes no sense and there really should have been more about it.

There is a little detail as well, but I wont spoil it.

really, this pasta wasn't scary it was more...gross. Small details really make a difference and this writer knows that, giving us a sense of what it would feel like in that room, even if we were just observing. A good writer keeps you interested, but a great writer makes you feel you're there.

My rating: 8/10 You're old friend: fanis01

P.S.

My previous review was Godzilla versus desotoryah (fanis01.deviantart.com/journal…)

and a review you may want to check out is betrayal by blood (fanis01.deviantart.com/journal…)

my clue to the next review: I can only think of one thing more sadistic than this (EAP)

(Note: If I will review a classic short story or something from deviantArt, I will mark it with a tag like EAP, HPL or TSW)

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